Talk:Archie Sonic the Hedgehog Issue 152

Aren't we supposed to write a little more... professionally than this? This is like a person telling another a summary rather than a detailing of events for an encyclopedia. I don't think stuff like "Basically..." and "all the gals in the comic" and "the science-y brain-y part" exactly fit the format, and there seems to be a lot of this kind of writing lately. I might change this myself when I have time, but regardless, it would probably help if people thought about how they were writing more. CrazyLea 04:09, 3 July 2009 (UTC)